Nagin in the Leaves

Mia was walking in a forest towards konoha; her objective was for her to get in the village so she could visit some tea houses. She wanted to work at one for the day, since she wanted to own one somewhere down the line.

She saw the gate and hoped she could get in as she walked up to it and waited until something happened or someone appeared.

Zero stood at the gates in silence as he watched those that had came to seek passage, some were merchants and others were travelers. All the same he halted them and asked their purpose of visit and identification before checking their belongings for any dangers before letting them in. Because of this he had came to see the figure of a lone female approaching the gates and stepped out from the shack he had been working in to address her," Hello. What is your business in Konoha and I need to see some Identification before allowing you passage into the village," speaking in a rather formal and stoic voice he stood there waiting for the females responses before responding in accordance.

Mia stopped before the guard, "Hello," She offered with a smile, "I'm looking for work in a Teahouse, since I'm interested in owning one in the future." She voiced and produced a card from the Teahouse she worked at in the Wind Country, "Unfortunately, this is the only ID I have." She offered as she mimiced and displayed disappointment in her meager offering, unsure if it was proper identification or not.

It was hard to offer up a form of id that she didn't have when she left her grandmother's home abruptly, in an environment where she never needed one.

A worker huh? While Zero remained skeptical he did however not sense a lie coming from her, though because of this he came to a small agreement. While she did not have any identification, he thought to himself before moving," What is your name? Also since you do not have any identification you will have to be escorted until you are proven to not be a threat to the leaf," with that he would motion to two other ninja who would help her in her stay.

"My name is Mia Hikari Umoi." Mia said and hearn him out before feigning an 'understanding' smile, "I understand- oh, I should probably give you this until I leave, hm?" She asked as she parted the heavy cloak she wore and produced a tanto, holding it out to him, "I used to for defense, but I don't think I'll need it in your village."

With her other hand, she produced the large draw string bag of what meager possessions she had on her person; some clothes, a hair brush, a bottle of perfume, 2 rolls of wire, feminine products, conditioner and body wash, a facial wash cloth, a small bag with an even smaller amount of make up, and a bottle of rosewater. "Do you need check my bag as well?" Mia inquired curiously. It was her first time trying to enter a village past it's gates so she wasn't so sure.

Akihana Akari wrote:
Hi! This topic was in topics needing replies but i dont see any claims. I might be going blind though so please point those out. <3

I'm unsure of whether or not I've been allowed in the village, and if I'll have to add the mention of 2 ninja into ever post I do in the village.

It has been more than 48 hours, I'm claiming entrance to the village.

So a few teeny tiny things.

1.) The major villages are military compounds, not really shopping areas for you to buy tea shops, and work in them, so it's a little strange, the story would work better in Tanzaku town to be honest. Though, Tea houses do exist in Konoha, so we can still keep the story, just keep this in mind in the future that you're in a military compound.

2.) When it comes to claiming entry, or doing any type of 48-hour post you will need to type a secondary post, as there is nothing to claim, without you preforming said action going through. In the last post by the Konoha shinobi he mentioned waiving two others over to escort you though the village, are you going along with that, are you ignoring them and walking straight through? We do not know any of that, so it's important to do a follow up post explaining such.

3.) I'll help you wrap up your topic real quick, this way we can secure your timeline


The two shinobi come over, each getting a briefing from the one on guard duty. With a soft smile they greet the girl, not showing any hostilities. "A few more things if you wouldn't mind ma'am." One of them steps forward, he offers his right hand requesting hers. "I need a small blood sample for background purposes, along with this a Fuinjutsu seal will be placed upon you to restrict your chakra network, as it is clear you have had some level of shinobi training. Your weapon will be kept here during your stay, and can be reclaimed at our administration building if you accept our terms."

If she should accept the process will be swift to get her on her way. A small prick to her index finger done with chakra, the red liquid moves atop his hand and into a vial which is given to his companion which vanishes after taking the girls weapon, going to the administration building. "Now stay still, this won't hurt a bit." His fingers glow on his right hand, placing themselves on her arm, an array forming, his right index placing itself in the middle of such as the formula vanishes, upon being placed she feels her chakra being locked off to her. "With this we are all done, enjoy your stay within Konohagakure no Sato." A Fire Country bow is done to the woman, their right hand forming a fists with sits at the base of their left open palm as they bow towards her, allowing her free travel, she has all the proper precautions.


(Seal placed is modified Five Elements seal which only seals off access to chakra, mark seal, and mark tracking seal. All of which can be broken by someone with Fuinjutsu breaking. Note this only occurs if you accept it, I just time skipped a bit to close this up as quickly as possible.)

(Thank you and I will keep those in mind for the next time, however i did also post a similar thread in tanzuka town but several mods jumped in to put a stop to it. Is there a way i caan get th eseal removed when I leave the village after collecting my weapon mheraybe?)

Mia complied with the blood test and waited patiently for them to do their work, and held them no ill-will. They had a job to do. it was as simple and straight-to-the-point as that. there was no reason for her to show any negativity about it when they were just following orders and regulations that came with their position as guardians of their village's gates. She offered her left wrist to the two men, "Could you put the seal on this wrist please?" She requested as she offered a feigned warm smile to them, "Im quite forgetful if I dont see something."

It was true, to a point, but she wasnt going to be so foolish as to pick a fight with trained and fuoll-fledged ninja. she wasnt ready for such a task yet and she certainly hadnt accomplished such a feat before. Though it was an exciting prospect, Mia had other plans than be discourtious to people who werewilling (if not a bit unnerved) to allow her entry into their village when she held no real identity badge for them to consider.

(I hope that is enough.)