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Ryo : 9550

Corpse Raven Empty Corpse Raven

Wed Jul 20, 2022 1:40 pm
Skill Name: Corpse Raven
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Visual Display:

Backstory: Upon receiving the blessing of the Dread Tree, Tsuna formed a contract with the Ravens of the Forest of Dream, granting him a glimpse of borrowed power. Corpse Raven was born from this, flaunting four dreadful wings as he stalks overall from above. The appearance of the wings might be different but still have the exact dimensions as the white ones in Snowraven.


Effect: When users enter Snowraven Sage Mode, they activate this skill. These skills represent the ravens tethering to the Dread Tree associated with the avian’s connection to the dead. Upon triggering, the user’s feathers emit a dreadful green, nearly soul tarnishing, that conjures a dome-shaped field of countless green ethereal feathers. They are created from the natural chakra in the area at 25 meters radius with the user at the center and move with them at their speed. The aura can be hidden whenever the user activates the Dustless technique. 

Within this barrier, up to 3 targets (of the user's choice) caught within its range lose self-immunity to their techniques. Thus it removes the ability to remain intact from using an otherwise devastating technique. For example, if a target should use an AoE where they are immune to their techniques, the target, and their equipment will suffer from the power of their Jutsu due to no longer being immune to the effects. Genjutsu is exempt from this.

Removing self-immunity does not affect the caster of this skill.

Per Animal Sage Mode guidelines, this skill is Slotless but requires WC to learn. 

Wordcount: 2,000.
Character Specific: Tsunayoshi Hoshimura
Bonus Requirements: Snowraven Sage Mode, Sensory Spec
Ayato Hyuuga
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Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Corpse Raven Empty Re: Corpse Raven

Fri Jul 22, 2022 7:56 pm
This is smart. We needed a few edits to make it suitable for approval.

Give a shape and speed to the aura.
A limit to the number of targets that can be affected by this technique
Specify that it doesn't affect Genjutsu
Reword: "the targets caught within its range lose self-immunity."  to "lose self-immunity to their techniques."
Ayato Hyuuga
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Hogokage
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Corpse Raven Empty Re: Corpse Raven

Fri Jul 22, 2022 7:56 pm
Approved
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