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Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Sat Nov 02, 2019 5:29 am
Name: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal
Element: --
Rank: B/A/S
Specialty: Fuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: --
Backstory: --

Appearance: Upon activation of the seal, a formula momentarily covers the user's palms, and ten ghostly blue flame orbs of chakra are created. Each ball is 30 cm in diameter, shaped like a sphere. 

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Handseals:
Placement: Rat->Dragon->Ox->Ram->Tiger/Boar/Snake
Activation: None
Duration: indefinite or up to 3/3/4 posts when activated
Cooldown: posts used +2
Range:  Placement: Touch / Spawning: Up to 5 meters from the user / Launching: up to 20/30/40 meters
Power: 40/60/Vigor
Speed: 40/60/Vigor
Health: --
Stat Boosts: --
What it does:   The user touches themselves or another person, marking them with the seal. The seal remains indefinitely or until used. Upon activation, 5/10/15 spheres of chakra are spawned in a five-meter radius around them and not within 3 meters of another character. The sealing formula shortcuts the chakra shape manipulation process typically required to achieve this.
 
The ghostly spheres hover around the caster keeping pace with them. One by one or all together, they can be launched by the user's will in the direction they see fit, traveling at jutsu speed. Once in motion cannot be manipulated in any way through this technique. Then upon impact, they explode. The explosion expands outwards at jutsu speed, damaging those caught in the blast at jutsu power. The explosion is shaped like a sphere 2 meters in diameter. 
 
The caster is not immune to the explosion; however, as part of a safety net, the orbs will not detonate if the user is within 2 meters from them. After all of the ghostly chakra, orbs have been detonated; the technique is placed on cooldown. Simultaneously any balls that have not been launched when the jutsu reaches the duration disperse, but any previously shot will remain on the field until dissipated.
 
The sealing technique bypasses the shape manipulation in ninjutsu; it gives the chakra composing the ghostly orbs a unique toxic potency. It becomes exceptionally corruptive when it comes to contact with an enemy's chakra system. If a hostile party attempts -and succeeds- to absorb either the ghostly orbs or the explosion attached to them, they will receive AP damage equal to half the activation cost of the rank the technique was used. This AP drain is actual once per post and will persist for the remaining duration of Ghost Lake Breaking seal. If more than one ball/explosion is absorbed in the same post, the opposing party will receive no additional AP damage.
 
Character Specific: --
Wordcount to learn: 1,750 / 2,750 / 5,000
Action Cost:  
Placement: 35/45/100 AP
Activation: 35/45/100 AP  and 10/15/50 AP upkeep
Mastery: --
Bonus Requirements: --
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site-Canon


Last edited by Ayato Hyuuga on Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:14 am; edited 11 times in total
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Sun Nov 03, 2019 6:36 pm
Bump
Rin Togakawa
Rin Togakawa
Citizen
Ryo : 14000

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Mon Nov 04, 2019 1:03 pm
Not sure being a fuin tech justify's the ap burn?
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Mon Nov 04, 2019 7:36 pm
Hey, thanks for reviewing this. I always considered fuinjutsu a spec where the techniques that fall under it seal/store/drain chakra and AP. A prominent example would be the chakra draining seal. I could add it as a requirement. A 1500 WC barrier to break before they get to Ghost River.

Additionally, the AP burn does not take place at the same time with the damage dealing properties of the technique. It works when a hostile party attempts to "lol nope" the orbs with an absorption field or similar techniques. And that occurs only once per post.

That is my case for the technique, and how the AP burn is important for its lore and in-game immersion.
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Wed Nov 06, 2019 5:37 am
Bump?
Rin Togakawa
Rin Togakawa
Citizen
Ryo : 14000

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Fri Nov 08, 2019 5:08 am
There’s a difference between storing ap and burning it, not all seals burn ap for example. I don’t really have an issue with the tech since it’s such a niech effect but I’d like to see some better justification for it than just because fuin
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Sun Nov 10, 2019 3:25 pm
Apologies I misunderstood. I made the edit I believe this is what you were looking for.
Rin Togakawa
Rin Togakawa
Citizen
Ryo : 14000

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Mon Nov 11, 2019 5:26 am
That’s better, only issue remaining is your last paragraph, since this isn’t really a pre-placed seal I’d like to see that removed or for this to be apped as a pre-placed seal that can only be placed on the user
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Mon Nov 11, 2019 10:52 am
If the user actually had to pre-place it I feel it would mess up the execution so I removed the last paragraph entirely.
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 90783

Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2) Empty Re: Ghost Lake Breaking Seal (v7.2)

Tue Nov 12, 2019 2:20 pm
It's a bump
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