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Uzumaki_Raven
Uzumaki_Raven
Citizen
Ryo : 500

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Uzumaki, Raven

Tue Jun 27, 2017 2:39 pm
Uzumaki Raven

   
   
Basic Information


Age: 21
Birthday: April 21
Gender: Male
Appearance: Raven Uzumaki has sleek long blood red hair that reached to the small of his back. He ties up the back of his hair with a ponytail and has two long bangs from either sides of his face. He has clear purple/amethyst colored eyes. His pale skin has a vibrant unnoticable sheen onto it. His deep calm voice is often found conflicting with his androgyous athletic built body. He shows little to no emotions on his face, in fear of the enemy making use of his emotions against him. He is 181cm tall while his weight is 79kg. He prefers wearing black clothes all around. He is often seen wearing a Black Yukata, that was gifted to him when he was in the oprhanage by the matron, with a Black traveling Cloak, that  also sports a hood to hide his trademark Uzumaki Blood Red hair.



Personality:
He is often thought to be a cold and careless, but that can be said as far away form the truth, as heaven is to hell. He is calm and analytical in every situation, and has a soft spot for children and is often found in the closest orphanage caring for them. He is seen to have shown emotions to only those whom he trusts and whom he is close to. He is seldom found excited by prospect of learning new fuinjutsu technques and/or ninjutsu. He is as oblivious as one gets in the matters of the opposite gender. He spends most of his time in a local library or roaming through the lands in search of adventure and secret ruins of clans long lost.


History:
Uzumaki Raven was born in an unknown location and having been found by an orphanage matron in village of Waves. He was named raven by the matron due to an unnatural attraction of ravens to the young child. Raven in his early years found reading books calming and soothing to the soul, and thus was often seen reading a book rather than playing with the other kids. His thirst for knowledge being recognized by the village was then recruited into the academy of Namigakure(Hidden in the Waves), which was not well known, but  took to the values of the now destroyed old Kiri. His physical strength was always lacking, but overlooked by due to his unnatural stamina and his diligence for speed. One of his famous quotes from the academy was " Speed is the factor which decides life and death". During his years in the academy he would be found visiting the shinobi libraries whereupon he found the mystical art of fuinjutsu. He was so taken upon it that he dedicated his personal training time into studying fuinjutsu leading him to lack in strength.
As the years progressed, Raven was ostracized for not bending along with the flow. His non-existant social life led to him being bullied and him closing off his emotions to the outside world. His progress in calligraphy and fuinjutsu more than made up for the torture and hell that the academy was for the young boy.
As the years progressed Raven soon began researching fuinjutsu more and stumbled upon a bingo book whereupon he saw the clan name "Uzumaki". Seeing the blood red hair on almost all Uzumaki he started researching about the clan and coming to the conclusion that he was a member of it, thus explaining his inherent ability in fuinjutsu.
In the final year of the academy, the bloody games were called upon and using his motto speed is the key to life, struggled to outlast the Jonin Commander the village-leader had decided to use for examination. Outlasting the time allotted to the academy students, Raven successfully managed to stay alive. Other students were not so lucky, more than 20 students were killed that day. Seeing the dead immobile faces of his now ex-classmates, he was hit with reality. Knowing that he could've been one of those, or maybe he would have to do this in the future, he decided his future was not in Nami. Thus after exams ended he quickly went back to the orphanage, grabbed his almost non-existant stuff, a few books from the library and his pocket money he had stored, and made a dash for walls. Utilizing the stealth methods taught in the academy he quickly made his way out of the village, vowing himself to not return unless he was stronger. In pursuit for knowledge and power he started his long adventure and journey to roam the lands and find anything and everything that could help him achieve his true potential.


Likes:Reading, Writing, Cooking for young Orphans, Fuinjutsu, Ramen, Sleeping under a tree on a nice windy day
Dislikes:Arrogant people, People who don't respect books, Betrayal, Mindless slaughter, Tardiness

   
Ninja Traits


Rank: E-Rank Missing Nin

Village:None/ Ex-Namigakure(Made up this village and is almost non-existant, except for the plot and something related to water to suite this char)

Element(s):Primary: Water
Specialties: None as of now

Clan:Uzumaki

Bijuu Request:N/A


   
Stats


Health:3
Chakra:8
Stamina:8
Speed:8
Strength:3

   
The Player


Other Characters:N/A
Roleplay Sample:In a very rural village in the lands of Fire Country, hearty laughter of children could be heard in the air. An out of the way orphanage in a very out of the way village, such laughter was seldom heard. But today was special, they had a visitor. the visitor was not only kind and helping, but looked after the children and played with them. This visitor was none other than Uzumaki Raven. A small kind smile could be seen on his face, only if you observed him carefully. Raven was waiting for the matron of the orphanage to come back from shopping for supplies and necessities. After seeing the downtrodden state of this orphanage, Raven did not hesitate to bring out his wallet and give the matron enough money for supplies that would last them for a while. Raven did a lot of odd jobs here and there during his travels and hardly used it. That's why he could afford such encounters. Raven while entertaining and playing with the younger children was actually analyzing the situation. The matron had left quite some time ago and the trip to the village markets was not too long. He concluded that something must have had happened to her to enable such late arrival.
The conclusion soon was verified when an elderly man walked in a hurry towards the orphanage. The elderly man relaxed a bit when he saw Raven and then calmly made his way towards the young Uzumaki. Raven knowing what was to be discussed, dismissed the children politely and beckoned the man inside a room. Once both were inside Raven activated a silencing seal and asked the man the details. Apparently a couple of bandits disguised as travelers had come to the village and raided the market. The matron was caught in the raid. Being pretty young and easy on the eyes, Raven knew what was up immediately. Not wanting that scenario to happen Raven calmed down the man and assured that he would take care of the problems, only asking the man to take care of the children in his absence. Before the man could thank him or offer an incentive, Raven de-actiavted his seal and darted off to the village's only entrance and exit. Being able to hunt in the forests for food and for odd jobs, finding tracks of the bandits was a piece of cake for Raven.
Soon arriving on a stronghold that was most definitely the camp of the bandits, Raven stealthily made his way to the camp. Using the shadows to hide himself from being overly noticed, Raven made his way to the guards and silently slit their throats from behind in order to make their deaths quiet and covert. Making his way into the camp and taking out any bandit that would cross paths with him, he made his way into the heart of the camp, where a small celebration was going on. Raven concluded this event to be the reason for light security. Raven cursed the bandits for their small sightedness. He then quickly started to move around the gathering marking down any noticeable thing as he encircled them. Raven knowing that the only way he could completely subdue this group was through stealth which had helped him a lot given that it was on the level of academy students and maybe some gennin. He also laid down some basic traps in the area to hinder and hopefully kill any bandit that triggers them. Being done with his traps and plans, he found out the location of the matron and other villagers that were kidnapped. Not wanting anything to happen to them, he had to make haste as the night was soon coming and he did not have much more time. Deciding on going through with his plans and simulating the scenario once again in his mind, he hardened his mind and threw shuriken and kunai with pretty good accuracy killing a few bandits. But Raven was not going to be sitting duck, by making use of his speed and sub-par shnobi training he easily cut through their ranks.
After finishing of the majority of the bandits a pretty hefty man hastily made his way towards Raven, whom Raven deduced was their leader. Noticing the commotion the bandit leader soon made his way towards Raven with Gennin level speed. Raven noticing that concluded that this was a Gennin Missing Nin. The leader being a missing nin of Nami, and being a fellow student of Raven, the leader soon recognized Raven, and hypocritically taunted the Uzumaki of being a coward for running away. Not allowing any emotions to come through, Raven's actions enraged the leader. Knowing his odds of survival dwindling with a relatively big force of bandits and a Gennin, Raven knew he had to rely on his wits to get through this sticky and messy situation. Raven was still hesitant due to high fatality probability, but he was nicked on the arm while dodging the attacks with his prided speed. The injury making up his mind he quickly steeled his nerves and in a new burst of speed and confidence he cut through the bandits while still dodging the missing nin, and sometimes using the missing nin's attacks to kill the remainig bandits. But Raven not having enough strength he was steadily pushed back. Not wanting to be overcome by panic, he quickly started recalling all the hand signs. Something he did often and chanted them off like a mantra to calm down his mind. This allowed his to concentrate on the fight and soon all the bandits were killed by his trusty pair of kunai, and meanwhile the missing nin's stamina not being able to keep up with the infamous Uzumaki stamina started huffing. Though Raven was not any better. Defending against 6 bandits and a missing nin along with his bleeding injuries had depleted him to almost dry of chakra. Raven thinking up a plan, decided to stumble and fall down while seemingly charging at the missing nin. The missing nin trying to take advantage rushed to Raven's position putting his guard down. This action was all Raven needed and Raven bolted from his position on the ground and into the missing nin thus embedding a kunai into the heart of the nin. Raven still exhausted from the fight made his way to the villagers and cut them free from the ropes, and proceeded to escort them back to the village. Once reaching the village Raven collapsed from Chakra and stamina exhaustion.
Waking up a few hours later due to Uzumaki regeneration, he made his way out to the orphanage. Not wanting to stay in this location further in risk of being exposed, he bid goodbye to everyone and deftly made his way to the bandit camp. It was just as he had left it, silent and bloody. He made his way to the leader's quarters and went through the stuff. Finding a few good ryo, a manual on a few Chakra Control techniques taught to gennin, a few basic Suiton ninjutsu, and some sealed kunai, he packed it all up and dashed out in a random direction.


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Last edited by Uzumaki_Raven on Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:11 am; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : Edited to fit in with application requirements)
Madrigal Kaguya
Madrigal Kaguya
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 10600

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 4:28 am
Hello there, I'll be the one handling your app today. 

On your appearance give us a description of his clothing as well. As interesting as it might be, I doubt your character would start naked lol. 

In regards to history I'm afraid you won't be able to be a missing nin from the mist village. IC the original mist village was destroyed three years ago and what was once Shimagakure became the new mist village. At the same time a massive storm wall went up around the island preventing intruders, but also locking everyone in. 

As such if you were in old kiri you'd be dead. If you tried to escape from the current Kiri you wouldn't be able to and would be killed. As such you'll need to edit your history to have you escape from a different village. Preferably one that isn't real, you can literally make up a village name and use it instead. 

Put rank as 'E' rank as 'Roaming Missing Nin' does not denote strength of any kind. 
You only start with one element at the start and since you do not train the other until at least genin you'll need to remove the lightning element from the app. 

E rank ninja do not start with a specialty, you can leave it blank or just type N/A if you would prefer. 

That's all I see, give the app a bump when the edits have been made and I shall come back to give it another once over.
Uzumaki_Raven
Uzumaki_Raven
Citizen
Ryo : 500

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 4:48 am
bump
Madrigal Kaguya
Madrigal Kaguya
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 10600

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:21 am
In regards to your clan, are you asking if you can have the bloodlines from the Uzumaki and the Hozuki clans?
Uzumaki_Raven
Uzumaki_Raven
Citizen
Ryo : 500

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:25 am
Yes. But it is completely optional. Call it plan b. I have thought out the play style so to speak and the hozuki liquefaction fits right in. But if not it is completely fine. I'll go with plan a
Madrigal Kaguya
Madrigal Kaguya
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 10600

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:40 am
Sorry but you can only have one clan bloodline at creation. If you can manage to acquire a Hozuki's or an Uzumaki's DNA you could always transplant that DNA to get some of the clan's bonus' but you cannot start with two no. 

The coding colored your rank black, would you mind fixing that?
Uzumaki_Raven
Uzumaki_Raven
Citizen
Ryo : 500

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:49 am
Edited. Gonna have to rethink Plan B.
Would I mind changing color? Please I'm so excited right now that I'll run 10km if you ask me to irl to simulate shinobi training Razz
Madrigal Kaguya
Madrigal Kaguya
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 10600

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 6:02 am
I'm confused, what do you mean by 'Mind changing color?'
Uzumaki_Raven
Uzumaki_Raven
Citizen
Ryo : 500

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 6:12 am
You asked me to fix the black coloured rank.
Madrigal Kaguya
Madrigal Kaguya
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 10600

Uzumaki, Raven Empty Re: Uzumaki, Raven

Thu Jun 29, 2017 6:15 am
Oh now I see, sorry it's 5 AM and I haven't slept. 

Trial approved, but don't get too excited yet friend. You'll still have to wait for one of these lovely people to come by and drop their own approval on this. 

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