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Kyuketsu Ryoshi
Thu Aug 24, 2023 11:54 pm
Name: Kyuketsu Ryoshi
Element: Blood
Rank: A / S
Specialty: Specless
Particular Jutsu Type: Enhancer
Backstory:
Appearance:
Handseals: -
Duration:Up to 2 / 4 Posts
Cooldown: Posts used X 2
Range: Self
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: Explained below
What it does: This Jutsu is a secret Kyuketsuki awakening that can be summed up as the Epitome of the Clan's "Gifts". The Kyuketsuki awakens their blood in such a way that their heart actually begins to beat.
The Kyuketsuki's natural senses increase in range by 5 meters
This Technique likewise Costs 1 Blood lust stack from the Nature of the Kyuketsuki Skill Per post of planned activation and must all be spent at activation and while this enhancer is active the skill can not generate any further Blood lust stacks.
All of the above effects are active for all Stages explained below. The user can Activate either Basic Stage for the Rank and must spend another 30 AP to activate the second stage at the end of their first post. Activating the second stage within a rank does not grant additional post duration. Each stage's effects are self contained and do not stack with each other unless they are written above.
A rank - Oni - +50/+50 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 5 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. This is the Most Basic Form of Kyuketsu Ryoshi
A rank - Jikininki - +60/+60 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 10 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat.
S rank - Kuchi-Onna - +70/+70 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 10 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. This is the basic S rank stage
S rank - Nure-Onna - +80/+80 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 15 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. During this Stage of Kyuketsu Ryoshi The natural senses of the Kyuketsuki are increased by another 5 Meters to a total of a 10 meter increase.
S rank - Kyuketsuki - +90/+90 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 15 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. During this Stage of Kyuketsu Ryoshi The natural senses of the Kyuketsuki are increased by another 5 Meters to a total of a 10 meter increase.
Wordcount to learn: 2500 / 4000
Action Cost: 40 / 50 activatiton - 40 / 50 upkeep
Mastery: Special - Noted above
Bonus Requirements:
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Noblesse Bloodline, Nature of the Kyuketsuki
Element: Blood
Rank: A / S
Specialty: Specless
Particular Jutsu Type: Enhancer
Backstory:
Appearance:
Handseals: -
Duration:Up to 2 / 4 Posts
Cooldown: Posts used X 2
Range: Self
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: Explained below
What it does: This Jutsu is a secret Kyuketsuki awakening that can be summed up as the Epitome of the Clan's "Gifts". The Kyuketsuki awakens their blood in such a way that their heart actually begins to beat.
The Kyuketsuki's natural senses increase in range by 5 meters
This Technique likewise Costs 1 Blood lust stack from the Nature of the Kyuketsuki Skill Per post of planned activation and must all be spent at activation and while this enhancer is active the skill can not generate any further Blood lust stacks.
All of the above effects are active for all Stages explained below. The user can Activate either Basic Stage for the Rank and must spend another 30 AP to activate the second stage at the end of their first post. Activating the second stage within a rank does not grant additional post duration. Each stage's effects are self contained and do not stack with each other unless they are written above.
A rank - Oni - +50/+50 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 5 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. This is the Most Basic Form of Kyuketsu Ryoshi
A rank - Jikininki - +60/+60 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 10 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat.
S rank - Kuchi-Onna - +70/+70 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 10 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. This is the basic S rank stage
S rank - Nure-Onna - +80/+80 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 15 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. During this Stage of Kyuketsu Ryoshi The natural senses of the Kyuketsuki are increased by another 5 Meters to a total of a 10 meter increase.
S rank - Kyuketsuki - +90/+90 To two stats of the users choice, the first time these stats are chosen they are permanently chosen and can not be changed. These MUST be the same stats chosen by any other ranks of Kyuketsu Ryoshi. The Kyuketsuki curse is Strengthened in their blood and begins to devour 15 hp from the user for Each post that it is active. The Kyuketsuki Claws at this stage are charge with their own life force and now have health equal to their highest increased stat. During this Stage of Kyuketsu Ryoshi The natural senses of the Kyuketsuki are increased by another 5 Meters to a total of a 10 meter increase.
Wordcount to learn: 2500 / 4000
Action Cost: 40 / 50 activatiton - 40 / 50 upkeep
Mastery: Special - Noted above
Bonus Requirements:
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Noblesse Bloodline, Nature of the Kyuketsuki
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Kyuketsu Ryoshi
Sat Sep 02, 2023 10:25 am
Hey;
So requested edits are as follows
1. I understand the push for specless techs, but in the first 3 lines, you do have a Sensory specific effect so I will ask that you add Sensory to it's spec.
2. Duration can only be 3 Posts at S Rank. A part of the other requested edits plays into this which I'll get to in a second, but S Rank Enhancers with +80 can only be 3 posts max as stated here
3. The Stat Boosts themselves; typically when an enhancer has multiple stat boosts per rank, it's at both ranks. Plus, most that way are currently gated or being gated behind PB. Also, as per Special Technique & Mastery guidelines, Enhancers cannot be given Mastery options, so the +90 version of this tech is currently invalid. Won't ask for it's full removal rn; but, that will need to be changed as to how the person can get the +90 version
4. This edit is almost a foil to 1; the third line in the effect is something which would be deemed Sensory related, especially with the doujutsu being tacked on at the end there. Even though Kyuketsuki have some noted enhanced senses, those are baseline and inherent; meaning the ability doesn't follow the need for specs which is why Kyu in general can have that. If that effect gets removed in it's entirety, you can keep the tech as specless.
5. To keep this in line with other enhancers that require a token cost, state that the tokens must be paid in full on the first post.
6. Lastly, mentioned it in the earlier edits, but mentioning it again this time specifically for the edit itself; the mastery option needs to be fully removed
So requested edits are as follows
1. I understand the push for specless techs, but in the first 3 lines, you do have a Sensory specific effect so I will ask that you add Sensory to it's spec.
2. Duration can only be 3 Posts at S Rank. A part of the other requested edits plays into this which I'll get to in a second, but S Rank Enhancers with +80 can only be 3 posts max as stated here
3. The Stat Boosts themselves; typically when an enhancer has multiple stat boosts per rank, it's at both ranks. Plus, most that way are currently gated or being gated behind PB. Also, as per Special Technique & Mastery guidelines, Enhancers cannot be given Mastery options, so the +90 version of this tech is currently invalid. Won't ask for it's full removal rn; but, that will need to be changed as to how the person can get the +90 version
4. This edit is almost a foil to 1; the third line in the effect is something which would be deemed Sensory related, especially with the doujutsu being tacked on at the end there. Even though Kyuketsuki have some noted enhanced senses, those are baseline and inherent; meaning the ability doesn't follow the need for specs which is why Kyu in general can have that. If that effect gets removed in it's entirety, you can keep the tech as specless.
5. To keep this in line with other enhancers that require a token cost, state that the tokens must be paid in full on the first post.
6. Lastly, mentioned it in the earlier edits, but mentioning it again this time specifically for the edit itself; the mastery option needs to be fully removed
- ArantimaMissing-Nin (B-rank)Survived 2021You've completed the Christmas Event of 2021 and qualified for the last reward, by partisan you are awarded this fancy badge!
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Summoning Contract : Forgotten Owls
Clan Specialty : Space/Time
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 54000
Re: Kyuketsu Ryoshi
Sat Sep 02, 2023 1:17 pm
Removed the Extra universal sensory range and limited it to only the Kyuketsuki inborn senses to see if that would be acceptable without the sensory spec.
Was already discussed but the 4 post duration is Acceptable due to having both a token and HP cost.
Removed the mastery and changed the progression.
Due to the way i've limited the activation stages it would be a 90/90 for 2 posts maximum and i've increased the total HP cost associated with that upper level.
I wanted to allow the claws to deal damage based on the users highest stat divided by 2. Example if they increased their chakra to 200 via this enhancer their claws would strike physically for 100 impact force but i don't want to complicate the enhancer overmuch.
Was already discussed but the 4 post duration is Acceptable due to having both a token and HP cost.
Removed the mastery and changed the progression.
Due to the way i've limited the activation stages it would be a 90/90 for 2 posts maximum and i've increased the total HP cost associated with that upper level.
I wanted to allow the claws to deal damage based on the users highest stat divided by 2. Example if they increased their chakra to 200 via this enhancer their claws would strike physically for 100 impact force but i don't want to complicate the enhancer overmuch.
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