- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Sage Art: Yin Release Lightning Dispatch
Thu Jun 01, 2023 12:10 pm
Name: Sage Art: Yin Release Lightning Dispatch
Element: Lightning, Yin
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: Debuff
Backstory: A technique a Sage with an affinity for Lightning Release developed. By design, the primary goal of this jutsu was to capture a target over killing them.
Appearance:
Duration: 1 post or Until Max Range is Reached
Cooldown: 3 posts
Range: 30/45 m*
Power: 50/Vigor
Speed: 50/Vigor
Health: --
Stat Boosts: -50/70 to two stats
What it does: Upon completion of the necessary handseals and the necessary costs being spent, the person extends both of their hands (one if used handed/or via Whistle Trigger; the implement if using an implement) and unleashes a cone of dark violet lightning made of both their elemental chakra, and some of their Nature Chakra in which they’ve previously gathered. This makes it more physical in its substance, allowing for devastating long-term effects, which are stated more in-depth in the paragraphs below. However, it will still seemingly pass through most techs, with both unaffected by one another. The exception to this clause is other techniques that can absorb a jutsu, barriers which follow the user, such as Susano’o, or barriers surrounding the user. At the same time, they’re incapable of moving, such as the Hyuugas’ Eight Trigams: Heavenly Palm Rotation. In this case, this technique and the defending one will clash, with this one needing to be equal to or greater than the opposing one’s power to go through it. In this case, the two still harmlessly pass through each other like usual.
As for the actual dimensions of the cone of lightning, its overall length will go out to 30/45 meters*, as will its height, but the technique’s width will only be a maximum of /10/15 meters. It will travel outwards from the caster’s hands until it reaches its maximum distance within this area at jutsu speed. One person who comes into contact with the lightning will have the debuff specified above applied to them for 2/3 posts after making contact with it. Additionally, anyone within this area, including the target, is subject to a stat check against their Vigor. Anyone with less Vigor than the power of this technique will be automatically afflicted with 10 Blindness Counters as if they severely overused Mangekyo Sharingan due to the toll the lightning takes on the optical nerves. However, there is a slight difference in the mechanics behind these specific ones. Ones gained by this technique can be removed by any medical technique of the same rank as this one, but whenever a person passes a stage of blindness (75/100), the counters can only ever be reduced to that stage’s minimum. Meaning it’s only permanent if this technique renders a person fully blind at a maximum of 100 Blindness Counters. The counters can be removed on 10/15 per med tech cast on an affected individual.
When casting, the user may expend additional Nature Energy Stacks after the first three to increase the amount of Blindness Counters, which this technique dishes out. Each stack spent after the third adds 5 to the base of 10, up to a maximum of 25. Also, since this technique utilizes Nature Chakra within its formation, any absorption attempts by a target without the ability to properly hold Nature Energy will result in the expected petrification effects, following all of its standard rules.
Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 2750/5,000
Action Cost: 50/100 + minimum, 3 Nature Energy Stacks; maximum 6 Nature Energy Stacks
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: Nature Chakra Proficiency + Sage Mode or Any Sage Mode Variant
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon [Creation Bounty]
Element: Lightning, Yin
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: Debuff
Backstory: A technique a Sage with an affinity for Lightning Release developed. By design, the primary goal of this jutsu was to capture a target over killing them.
Appearance:
- Sage Art:
Duration: 1 post or Until Max Range is Reached
Cooldown: 3 posts
Range: 30/45 m*
Power: 50/Vigor
Speed: 50/Vigor
Health: --
Stat Boosts: -50/70 to two stats
What it does: Upon completion of the necessary handseals and the necessary costs being spent, the person extends both of their hands (one if used handed/or via Whistle Trigger; the implement if using an implement) and unleashes a cone of dark violet lightning made of both their elemental chakra, and some of their Nature Chakra in which they’ve previously gathered. This makes it more physical in its substance, allowing for devastating long-term effects, which are stated more in-depth in the paragraphs below. However, it will still seemingly pass through most techs, with both unaffected by one another. The exception to this clause is other techniques that can absorb a jutsu, barriers which follow the user, such as Susano’o, or barriers surrounding the user. At the same time, they’re incapable of moving, such as the Hyuugas’ Eight Trigams: Heavenly Palm Rotation. In this case, this technique and the defending one will clash, with this one needing to be equal to or greater than the opposing one’s power to go through it. In this case, the two still harmlessly pass through each other like usual.
As for the actual dimensions of the cone of lightning, its overall length will go out to 30/45 meters*, as will its height, but the technique’s width will only be a maximum of /10/15 meters. It will travel outwards from the caster’s hands until it reaches its maximum distance within this area at jutsu speed. One person who comes into contact with the lightning will have the debuff specified above applied to them for 2/3 posts after making contact with it. Additionally, anyone within this area, including the target, is subject to a stat check against their Vigor. Anyone with less Vigor than the power of this technique will be automatically afflicted with 10 Blindness Counters as if they severely overused Mangekyo Sharingan due to the toll the lightning takes on the optical nerves. However, there is a slight difference in the mechanics behind these specific ones. Ones gained by this technique can be removed by any medical technique of the same rank as this one, but whenever a person passes a stage of blindness (75/100), the counters can only ever be reduced to that stage’s minimum. Meaning it’s only permanent if this technique renders a person fully blind at a maximum of 100 Blindness Counters. The counters can be removed on 10/15 per med tech cast on an affected individual.
When casting, the user may expend additional Nature Energy Stacks after the first three to increase the amount of Blindness Counters, which this technique dishes out. Each stack spent after the third adds 5 to the base of 10, up to a maximum of 25. Also, since this technique utilizes Nature Chakra within its formation, any absorption attempts by a target without the ability to properly hold Nature Energy will result in the expected petrification effects, following all of its standard rules.
Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 2750/5,000
Action Cost: 50/100 + minimum, 3 Nature Energy Stacks; maximum 6 Nature Energy Stacks
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: Nature Chakra Proficiency + Sage Mode or Any Sage Mode Variant
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon [Creation Bounty]
- Shiro HyugaMaster
- Stat Page : The Coming Storm
Clan Specialty : Taijutsu
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 11050
Re: Sage Art: Yin Release Lightning Dispatch
Mon Jun 05, 2023 11:22 am
trial approved for now, I think the blindness counters thing is interesting, however please add how long the debuff for speed and strength lasts for.
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Mementos of Noon - Hiroki Shimada
Mission Record : Hiroki's Mission Log
Living Clones : Mementos of Dawn - Hiro Shimada
Mementos of Dusk - Ki Shimada
Familiar : Shichiro
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 150580
Re: Sage Art: Yin Release Lightning Dispatch
Mon Jun 05, 2023 8:17 pm
Talked about the above requested edit with the trial approval mod on discord to let them know that it was already there, however made an edit to add the words "absorption attempts of this technique" to clarify as without it, the line was vague
- Ayato HyuugaHogokage
- Stat Page : Ayato
Mission Record : Link
Summoning Contract : Forest of Dreams Ravens
Living Clones : Natsuki
Toneri
Familiar : Maneki
Legendary Equipment : Raiment of Eternal Fortune
Stone of Gelel
Clan Specialty : Taijutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 435700
Re: Sage Art: Yin Release Lightning Dispatch
Sun Jun 11, 2023 7:44 am
Requested edit remove the B-rank version since it goes beyond what jutsu of that rank can do.
Approved
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