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Travin UchihaGenin
- Stat Page : The Crimson Star
Clan Specialty : Genjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 0
Perfected Windwall
Fri May 12, 2023 12:19 pm
Name: Perfected Windwall
Element: Wind
Rank: S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory:
Appearance:
Handseals: Tiger, Ox, Snake, Dragon, Tiger, Bird
Duration: 1
Cooldown: posted used +2
Range: 30m diameter
Power: Vigor
Speed: Vigor
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does: Creates a perfect sphere of wind with the user at the center extending from the user to the max range of the jutsu. Anything hit by the jutsu either while expanding or while at full size takes damage equal to jutsu power, and if they have less strength than the power of this jutsu they are pushed back to the max range of this jutsu at jutsu speed. If this causes the victim to hit another object they will take damage equal to the impact force of this jutsu again for each object hit to a max of 2 objects, as they smash through said object due to the force of this jutsu. However, if the object in question has more health than the power of this jutsu the victim is pinned to the object unable to move their body due to the force for the duration of this jutsu. The force of this jutsu is so great that it will push any jutsu or attack used against it with less power back in the direction it came from. With power and speed equal to the power and speed of this jutsu.
When used on the ground the sphere becomes a dome, however, if the user is in the air or flying it is sphere. Any jutsu or attack with more power than this jutsu will pass harmlessly through the sphere of wind.
Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 5k
Action Cost: 100/50
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Wind Wall jutsu
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon
Element: Wind
Rank: S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory:
Appearance:
Handseals: Tiger, Ox, Snake, Dragon, Tiger, Bird
Duration: 1
Cooldown: posted used +2
Range: 30m diameter
Power: Vigor
Speed: Vigor
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does: Creates a perfect sphere of wind with the user at the center extending from the user to the max range of the jutsu. Anything hit by the jutsu either while expanding or while at full size takes damage equal to jutsu power, and if they have less strength than the power of this jutsu they are pushed back to the max range of this jutsu at jutsu speed. If this causes the victim to hit another object they will take damage equal to the impact force of this jutsu again for each object hit to a max of 2 objects, as they smash through said object due to the force of this jutsu. However, if the object in question has more health than the power of this jutsu the victim is pinned to the object unable to move their body due to the force for the duration of this jutsu. The force of this jutsu is so great that it will push any jutsu or attack used against it with less power back in the direction it came from. With power and speed equal to the power and speed of this jutsu.
When used on the ground the sphere becomes a dome, however, if the user is in the air or flying it is sphere. Any jutsu or attack with more power than this jutsu will pass harmlessly through the sphere of wind.
Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 5k
Action Cost: 100/50
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Wind Wall jutsu
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon
Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Link
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 18
Re: Perfected Windwall
Wed May 17, 2023 10:13 pm
Heyo,
So first, duration needs to be 1 post or until max distance is reached; cooldown needs to be posts used + 2 since it's an S Rank tech.
Range; specify whether this is radius or diameter.
As for effect; with it being a perfect sphere around the user, specify whether this effects the ground beneath them or not. If it doesn't specify it being a dome. You can also add something like if the caster is in the air when activating this technique, it can then become a full sphere.
"If this causes the victim to hit another object they will take damage equal to the power of this jutsu again for each object hit to a max of 2 objects," This damage will have to be calculated based on impact force instead of jutsu power as it's the collision causing the damage in this instance.
Lastly, after the last paragraph, just specify that techniques which meet or beat the power of this one will go through, unaffected by one another.
So first, duration needs to be 1 post or until max distance is reached; cooldown needs to be posts used + 2 since it's an S Rank tech.
Range; specify whether this is radius or diameter.
As for effect; with it being a perfect sphere around the user, specify whether this effects the ground beneath them or not. If it doesn't specify it being a dome. You can also add something like if the caster is in the air when activating this technique, it can then become a full sphere.
"If this causes the victim to hit another object they will take damage equal to the power of this jutsu again for each object hit to a max of 2 objects," This damage will have to be calculated based on impact force instead of jutsu power as it's the collision causing the damage in this instance.
Lastly, after the last paragraph, just specify that techniques which meet or beat the power of this one will go through, unaffected by one another.
- Travin UchihaGenin
- Stat Page : The Crimson Star
Clan Specialty : Genjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 0
Re: Perfected Windwall
Fri May 19, 2023 10:36 am
Made the edits
- Hiroki ShimadaChunin
- Stat Page : Link
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kumogakure
Ryo : 18
Re: Perfected Windwall
Mon May 22, 2023 11:05 am
Ok, so upon re-reviewing this after the edits had been made:
I'll let you add that the technique can either be cast as a one time burst at it's full range, which for that you can increase to 30 m radius. Additionally, it can be cast as a sustained AoE, but will only have a range of 30 m in diameter if used in that way.
I'll let you add that the technique can either be cast as a one time burst at it's full range, which for that you can increase to 30 m radius. Additionally, it can be cast as a sustained AoE, but will only have a range of 30 m in diameter if used in that way.
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