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Dracoso
Dracoso
Chunin
Chunin
Stat Page : Dracoso Hehane
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Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 88570

Reap the Whirlwind Empty Reap the Whirlwind

Thu Oct 06, 2022 9:35 pm
Name: Reap the Whirlwind
Element: Tempest
Rank: D/C/B/A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: Amplifier
Backstory: As the storm barrier protects the people of Kirigakure, many of the ninjas that live within draw upon it to enhance their abilities. By drawing the tempest element into their chakra, ninjas found their attacks carrying the storm with their efforts.

Appearance: The air around the location of the handseals will cause a small natural stir of energy to appear. For example, with whistle trigger or beats trigger, this will cover the mouth and neck. With two-handed seals, this covers the hands and arms. This can form as moisture, tiny flashes of lightning, small flickers of wind, or anything similar.
Handseals: Rat - Bird (D) - Boar (C) - Hare (B) - Ox (A) - Dragon (S)
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Range: -
Power: 10/20/30/50/70
Speed:
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does: Once the Handseals for this technique are performed the user must perform another Ninjutsu technique of one of the following elements: Water, Wind, Lightning, Tempest, Yin, and/or Yang. Should they successfully perform the technique then this one will be activated. 

If successfully cast the user is free to add 10/20/30/50/70 points to the jutsu they used. These points may be added to the jutsu cast in anyway the user wishes, so for example one could put all points into speed, split them between power and speed, etc. This buff is permanent, and the jutsu will remain amplified until the technique ends

If this jutsu is used to amplify any ninjutsu technique that is not of the Tempest element or that the rank of this jutsu is higher than the tempest ninjutsu technique it is amplifying, it will add the additional tempest status effect: 
Those hit by this technique must have a chakra stat higher than the power of this jutsu or be subject to a status effect that causes them to have to repeat each hand seal they need for their following technique, as well as that technique requiring an additional flat amount of ap equal to the rank of the tempest technique. In this case, the extra ap is 10/20/30/50/70 respectively. In the case of this jutsu being a higher rank than the tempest technique it is amplifying, the listed extra ap cost for this jutsu will replace the original technique's extra ap cost.

Only one jutsu may be amplified per usage.

Wordcount to learn: 500/1000/1500/2500/4000
Action Cost: 10/20/30/50/70
Mastery: N/A
Bonus Requirements: Ninjutsu as either a specialty or a clan specialty
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Village Exclusive


Last edited by Dracoso on Sun Oct 23, 2022 6:20 pm; edited 2 times in total
Yuuma Fujiwara
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Chunin
Chunin
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Remove Medical Fuuinjutsu Ninjutsu Default
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Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Wed Oct 12, 2022 4:20 pm
Interesting technique but I'm unable to approve it as it currently stands and the reasoning is pretty simple: this amplifier just has too much going on. As it currently reads, it feels like three techniques in one.

The simplest solution is to cut out either the stacking mechanic or the extra tempest mechanic. Unfortunately, I don't feel comfortable allowing all of this to be stacked into a single amplification technique, but as always, I am open to creative solutions. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to hit me up in discord or reply to this topic.
Dracoso
Dracoso
Chunin
Chunin
Stat Page : Dracoso Hehane
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Wind Water Lightning Default
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 88570

Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Sun Oct 23, 2022 6:21 pm
removed the stack effect to help address rebalancing. keeping the tempest passive otherwise this would no longer be a tempest amplifier.
Arantima
Arantima
Missing-Nin (C-rank)
Missing-Nin (C-rank)
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Ryo : 40000

Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Mon Oct 24, 2022 11:14 am
"Those hit by this technique must have a chakra stat higher than the power of this jutsu or be subject to a status effect that causes them to have to repeat each hand seal they need for their following technique, as well as that technique requiring an additional flat amount of ap equal to the rank of the tempest technique. In this case, the extra ap is 10/20/30/50/70 respectively. In the case of this jutsu being a higher rank than the tempest technique it is amplifying, the listed extra ap cost for this jutsu will replace the original technique's extra ap cost."

So You Double the Hand seals AND Throw an extra AP cost onto the next jutsu cast by the person that is hit by the amplified jutsu.- Im not 100% sure I am comfortable with both of those effects being added in a single jutsu. I would much rather the selection need to be made at the casting of this amplifier. I am ok with keeping the choice between either doubled hand seals or increased ap cost but not both at once.
Dracoso
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Chunin
Chunin
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Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 88570

Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Mon Oct 24, 2022 12:32 pm
For your request Arantima, please see any of the tempest techniques below:

Microburst
Single Cell
Storm Sphere

Every tempest jutsu applies this passive as this is the tempest passive. As such, removing either part of this would actually make it no longer using the tempest passive and be altering the original ability.
Arantima
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Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Mon Oct 24, 2022 12:39 pm
It will be allowed for now, but that passive effect of Tempest release as a whole will be getting a Look over as it is VERY powerful for a passive effect just due to an element.
Dracoso
Dracoso
Chunin
Chunin
Stat Page : Dracoso Hehane
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Wind Water Lightning Default
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Kirigakure
Ryo : 88570

Reap the Whirlwind Empty Re: Reap the Whirlwind

Mon Oct 24, 2022 12:42 pm
I can understand that. the reasons it can be so strong is because 1: is restricted in Kiri, and 2: it requires 3 specific elements for the adv element slot. on top of that, the odds of this being used more than twice in any combat is rather small unless they make a build specific to cooldowns, which would apply to the normal tempest jutsu as well.
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