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Uchiha Madara
Uchiha Madara
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Black Hole Empty Black Hole

Sat Aug 20, 2022 9:14 pm
Name: Black Hole
Element: -
Rank: A
Specialty: Genjutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: -
Backstory: This jutsu was developed by someone fascinated with black holes. Though they never could manage to learn a space/time jutsu, they were able to replicate one's effects reasonably accurately.

Appearance: An opaque, swirling black orb 1m in diameter. If triggered, the orb appears to suck in and atomize everything around it.
Handseals: Dog -> rat -> snake -> tiger -> snake
Duration: Up to 4 posts
Cooldown: Posts used +2
Range: 40m diameter around user
Power: 50
Speed: 50 (for the orb formation)
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
Upon performing the final seal, an orb of opaque swirling black chakra extends 1m from the user in all directions at jutsu speed (the user can see through this technique as if it were transparent). The orb persists for the duration of the jutsu. If someone (not the user or those they deem immune) sees this orb and is within the range of the technique, they are triggered into this genjutsu (max of 3 people affected per use). The user may end this jutsu at any time during its duration.

Those triggered into this genjutsu will perceive that the orb of chakra is exerting a powerful suction force that has made it impossible to control their movements. They perceive that themselves and anything else around the orb is being sucked into the orb and atomized once they touch it (except for the user). As the target is sucked towards the orb, they perceive that they are hurtling through the air like a rag doll in a disorienting fashion as they cannot move of their own free will. This genjutsu causes paralysis; therefore, the user will be paralyzed when someone is triggered into this genjutsu. While maintaining the paralysis effect, the caster can't cast any new jutsus, but any previously used jutsus can still be maintained.

If someone remains under the effects of this genjutsu for three posts, they perceive that they have touched the orb and have been atomized. This causes them to be knocked out for the remainder of the thread unless a medical jutsu is used to heal the mental trauma.  

Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 2500
Action Cost: 40 + 20 upkeep
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: Genjutsu main spec
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site Canon


Last edited by Uchiha Madara on Sat Sep 03, 2022 2:58 pm; edited 5 times in total
Crom Tokage
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Genin
Stat Page : Stats
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Wind Water Default
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 54805

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Mon Aug 22, 2022 1:55 pm
Quick edit request for this is bumping up the power/speed from 40 to 50 due to it being an A-rank Tech. 

Also since this does involve paraylsis can I also get the clause of "While maintaining the effect the caster can't cast any new jutsus, but any previously used jutsus can still be maintained."

Also is this a Canon/Site-canon, Custom, BL, or VE tech? I'm assuming its a Site-canon tech.
Uchiha Madara
Uchiha Madara
Genin
Genin
Survived 2021
You've completed the Christmas Event of 2021 and qualified for the last reward, by partisan you are awarded this fancy badge!
Stat Page : Madara

Living Clones : Eternity
Snow
Genjutsu Sensory Space Time Default
Water Fire Default
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 111900

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Mon Aug 22, 2022 4:49 pm
fixed!
Crom Tokage
Crom Tokage
Genin
Genin
Stat Page : Stats
Remove Ninjutsu Sensory Default
Wind Water Default
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 54805

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Mon Aug 22, 2022 5:31 pm
Trial Approved
Enishi
Enishi
Nova
Nova
Stat Page : The Wraith
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Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 54500

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Sun Aug 28, 2022 11:41 am
Uh you forgot to increase the speed of this technique to 50 as per A rank jutsu rules.
Uchiha Madara
Uchiha Madara
Genin
Genin
Survived 2021
You've completed the Christmas Event of 2021 and qualified for the last reward, by partisan you are awarded this fancy badge!
Stat Page : Madara

Living Clones : Eternity
Snow
Genjutsu Sensory Space Time Default
Water Fire Default
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 111900

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Sun Aug 28, 2022 6:28 pm
Done!
Enishi
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Stat Page : The Wraith
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Remove Earth Water Lightning Remove Default
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Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Sat Sep 03, 2022 12:36 pm
Ah, apologies, one more thing. Can you state that the user has to be stationary and remove any mention of the user being able to move? You want a sustainable aura, but sustainable auras that you can move with have to be a smaller range like a 5m radius max, but this has a bigger range so in order to compensate, lack of movement would be a solid drawback.

Please make the requested edit!
Uchiha Madara
Uchiha Madara
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Genin
Survived 2021
You've completed the Christmas Event of 2021 and qualified for the last reward, by partisan you are awarded this fancy badge!
Stat Page : Madara

Living Clones : Eternity
Snow
Genjutsu Sensory Space Time Default
Water Fire Default
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 111900

Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Sat Sep 03, 2022 2:56 pm
Oof, I removed the part where it follows the user then.

I also adjusted the colored portions of this sentence:

"They perceive that themselves and anything else around the user orb is being sucked into the orb and atomized once they touch it (except for the user)"
Crom Tokage
Crom Tokage
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Genin
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Black Hole Empty Re: Black Hole

Thu Nov 24, 2022 2:40 am
Approved
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