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Jun Shibasaki
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 10, 2022 6:17 pm
Bloodline Name Tengan  天眼
Originating Clan: Shibasaki Clan

Appearance:

Stage 1:
Stage 2:
Stage 3:
Stage 4:
Backstory: The Tengan, known as the "Demon's Eyes" in the small village where the Shibasaki clan was born in Volcano Country, or Celestial Eyes (天眼, Tengan), the name given to this doujustu in Funkagakure and officially adopted, is the unique doujustu of the Shibasaki clan. It epitomizes the connection and synchrony that the Shibasaki clan has with the Sun and Solar Chakra,  manifesting through orange/yellow flames that come out of the eyes of its users. Such occurs through the irradiation of the Solar Nature Chakra through the eyes of a Shibasaki member, emitting a glow that varies in intensity with its stages, which makes clan members less "stealthy" in nocturnal situations but also provides a natural source of light for the user and allies. The Tengan also grants members of the Shibasaki clan unique visual abilities and a perception of many forms of energy and matter at almost molecular level. It is said that each Tengan of a Shibasaki is like a pint-sized sun, so bright and hot they are. In order to master it, the Shibasaki clan must practice in order to fully synchronize their Chakra, Mind, Heart and Soul with the Tengan. Legends call those who achieve such a feat “Sun Tamers”.  


What it does: The Tengan has many stages, granting the user new abilities at each one, requiring practice and training in order to master it to its full potential.

Stage 1:

Stage 2:

Stage 3:

Stage 4 or Perfect Tengan:
 
           

Wordcount to Learn: 2,000 (Awakening) > 4,000 (Stage 2) > 6,000 (Stage 3), > 8,000 (Stage 4)
Action Cost per post: 1st Stage = 20 , 2nd Stage =15 , Third Stage = 10 , Perfect Stage = 25 .
Bonus Requirements: Must be born as a Shibasaki Clan member OR transplanting stolen eye from past owner.


Last edited by Jun Shibasaki on Wed Aug 17, 2022 3:00 pm; edited 1 time in total
Niento Takami
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Re: Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 17, 2022 2:49 pm
So far after reading this its pretty straightfoward but there are some things we need to address.

which allows them to perceive when under the influence of Genjustu of A-Rank and below < This won't fly as we have been removing these types of effects from other bloodline based abilities and skills. As such any mention of genjutsu effects like this in the other stages as well.

Also the 360 vision for the 3rd stage may need to be removed due to it being an exact copy of the Byakugan's vision. In addition just note that any techniques used through the eyes will need to be registered as such.

Jun Shibasaki
Jun Shibasaki
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Re: Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 17, 2022 2:59 pm
Greetings, first of all thanks for the feedback. I'll do the changes you pointed out, but I have some doubts:

Regarding the Stage 3 360 vision, I think that you meant Stage 4, and the vision itself isn't 360 degrees, but only the motion sensoring, with the user vision being limited to regular line of sight. If it still need to be removed or modfied, any suggestion of a amount of degrees this motion sensoring could cover?

Regarding the genjustu part, done!
Niento Takami
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Re: Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 17, 2022 3:07 pm
Okay so its not actual vision but just like a radar?

If that is the case i could swing that so long as it wasn't directly like the Byakugan.
Jun Shibasaki
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Re: Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 17, 2022 3:10 pm
Yep, kind like a radar but using the same mechanism as an real life infrared sensor.
Niento Takami
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Tengan 天眼 Empty Re: Tengan 天眼

Wed Aug 17, 2022 3:26 pm
okay that's pretty interesting.

Thanks for the clarification. Approved
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