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Zeo Kamigawa
Zeo Kamigawa
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Ryo : 48400

Storm Release Chakra Mode Empty Storm Release Chakra Mode

Sat Dec 04, 2021 12:09 am
Name: Storm Release Chakra Mode
Element: Storm Release
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu or Taijutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: Enhancement
Backstory: Storm release at its core involved precision, fast speeds and powerful blasts of energy beyond anything in natural chakra means. Embodying this technique to its fullest degree-- a mysterious masked ninja from Hoshigakure applied it into his own, using the natural speeds and energy of storm release to enhance his own body. Achieving this, he became far faster, amplifying nin-taijutsu to an extreme level of power. Enemies will barely see the glow of their movement before it's too late…


Appearance: The caster infuses chakra from storm release into their own body. The enhancement either electrifies their veins, causing them to light up under the skin, or some find runes via chakra pathways forming along the body, creating an almost armor-like mirage. Key parts of their body or features light up, showing the supercharged state of their bodies.
Storm Release Chakra Mode Tm7XXAz
Movement:
Handseals: Hare > Tiger > Ox > Snake > Dragon >/ Horse
Duration: 2 / 3 posts
Cooldown: X2 of duration
Range: Self/ See below
Power:
Speed: 60/70
Health:
Stat Boosts: +60/+70 to Speed & Vigor
What it does: User channels Storm Release into their own veins and chakra network-- literally electrifying the body with a supercharged state. As the glow of Storm Release chakra mode surrounds the user, the caster can freely enter high-speed combat with incredible accuracy and destructive power, whether it is in Taijutsu or ninjutsu.

Due to the fast speed of the jutsu, if used, once per this jutsu's duration, the caster can apply the ability of the natural speed of Storm Release, allowing themselves to give a temporary burst of speed in the form of a 'living laser' movement, adding the jutsu's speed to the speed of the user. This Speed acts as a burst of storm release, resulting in the person's movement being akin to a laser beam with the resulting trail. Similar to "Body Flicker" the user may travel at the accumulated speed, but with control of their trajectory and momentum to stop or turn. The maximum distance the user may travel is equal to their Vigor + Speed stats in meters and may not exceed a total speed & distance of 250 during this instant dash. Users must pay the activation cost of this jutsu, plus +15 AP,  for its ‘upkeep’ phase to use this during that post.   This technique may not be activated while the user has any area of effect techniques (auras originating with and following the body, etc.) active.



Character Specific: n/a
Wordcount to learn: 2500/4000
Action Cost: 40/50 Activation , 20/25 upkeep.
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: Must know Storm Release + 2  A rank Storm techniques besides this one
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site Canon


Last edited by Zeo Kamigawa on Sun Dec 19, 2021 10:59 pm; edited 10 times in total
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Storm Release Chakra Mode Empty Re: Storm Release Chakra Mode

Tue Dec 07, 2021 9:31 pm
Zeo Kamigawa wrote:Name: Storm Release Chakra Mode
Element: Storm Release
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu or Taijutsu
Particular Jutsu Type: Enhancement
Backstory: Storm release at its core involved precision, fast speeds and powerful blasts of energy beyond anything in natural chakra means. Embodying this technique to its fullest degree-- a mysterious masked ninja from Hoshigakure applied it into his own, using the natural speeds and energy of storm release to enhance his own body. Achieving this, he became far faster, amplifying nin-taijutsu to an extreme level of power. Enemies will barely see the glow of their movement before it's too late…


Appearance: The caster infuses chakra from storm release into their own body. The enhancement either electrifies their veins, causing them to light up under the skin, or some find runes via chakra pathways forming along the body, creating an almost armor-like mirage. Key parts of their body or features light up, showing the supercharged state of their bodies.
Storm Release Chakra Mode Tm7XXAz
Movement:
Handseals: Hare > Tiger > Ox > Snake > Dragon >/ Horse
Duration: 2 / 3 posts
Cooldown: 2+ duration
Range: Self/ See below
Power:  60/80
Speed: 60/80
Health:
Stat Boosts: +60/+80 to Speed & Vigor
What it does: User channels Storm Release into their own veins and chakra network-- literally electrifying the body with a supercharged state. As the glow of Storm Release chakra mode surrounds the user, the caster can freely enter high speed combat with incredible accuracy and destructive power, whether it is in Taijutsu or ninjutsu.

Due to the fast speed of the jutsu, if used, once per post, the caster can apply the ability of the natural speed of Storm Release, allowing themselves to give a temporary boost to speed equal to this jutsu’s speed stat-- effectively using it as akin to a high-speed dash, moving like a living laser for a brief moment. Much like storm release attacks, the user can freely control their direction and momentum, allowing them far more control when they go that fast from sharp turns to where they land. This can be used to close gaps or escape danger, but cannot use to ‘instant travel’ within 3 meters of another enemy target. Users must pay the activation cost of this jutsu for its ‘upkeep’ phase to use this during that post.  Melee blows used when this Jutsu is active can be used that reflect's jutsu Power if used ( jutsu speed or power do not override or stack with other techniques used while enhancement is active. ) The maximum distance the user may travel is equal to their Vigor + Speed stats in meters, and cannot surpass 250.

Scaling:  If the user has Ninjutsu stats, power, and speed scales to Vigor. If the user has Taijutsu, the jutsu scales to the user's speed/strength depending on style. If the user possesses both-- one may be freely chosen.


Character Specific: n/a
Wordcount to learn: 2500/4000
Action Cost: 40/50 Activation , 20/25 upkeep.
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Must know Storm Release + 2  A rank Storm techniques besides this one
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Site Canon

Quoted for posterity.

Theres a fair bit with this one that needs to be addressed. Firstly the Scaling needs to be wholesale removed. And the Most of it needs to be entirely rewritten.

This Enhancer doesn't have the requirements for being a 60/80 enhancer with extra abilities let alone the abilities that are like miniature jutsu all their own. There is a Choice ahead of you.

You can keep the Enhancer as a 60/80 and 2/3 post enhancer, Remove the handseals and remove the special effects and just have it be a Simple 60/80 enhancer that is handsealless in accordance with enhancer guidelines.

OR You can make this a 60/70 enhancer with the following ability. "The user of this enhancer may add +60/70 to their speed for one post by spending the activation cost again. This Speed is No different from normal movement and may not exceed 250. Doing so puts the enhancer on cooldown at the end of the post." The removal of the Punches, is due to the fact that enhancers can not deal damage, and the Scaling effect on the speed is Not only not allowed but it is useless as stats are capped at 250. You are enhancing speed already by 60/70 so by utilizing this ability with the enhancer active would turn that increase into 120 or 140.

Lets say that you had a stat of 100, increased it by 60.. Then The scaling went off. That would make the scaled speed of the technique 110. Adding that to 160 would cap it at 250 without issue. So no, There is no need for scaling in this instance. And the reason for making the technique go on cooldown is to keep it in line with many other enhancers that have an extra activatable effect.

So let me know which option you would like the 60/80 with no extras but no handseals. Or the 60/70 with the above extra that requires handseals.
Zeo Kamigawa
Zeo Kamigawa
Chunin
Chunin
Ryo : 48400

Storm Release Chakra Mode Empty Re: Storm Release Chakra Mode

Wed Dec 08, 2021 8:43 am
Changes applied with both this post and from discord chats . Thank you
Arantima
Arantima
Vagabond (C-Rank)
Vagabond (C-Rank)
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Ryo : 77300

Storm Release Chakra Mode Empty Re: Storm Release Chakra Mode

Wed Dec 08, 2021 5:56 pm
Trial approved
Ichigo Sato
Ichigo Sato
Deputy Kage
Ryo : 131150

Storm Release Chakra Mode Empty Re: Storm Release Chakra Mode

Mon Dec 20, 2021 2:28 pm
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