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Kain Wraith
Kain Wraith
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 16000

Water Style: Dehydration Empty Water Style: Dehydration

Thu Dec 24, 2020 12:31 pm
Name: Water Style: Dehydration 
Element: -
Rank: B
Specialty: Genjutsu 
Special Jutsu Type:  Debuff
Backstory:
Created by the Rentei clan as a test once a member had awoken the first stage of the Seigan. It was said that if they were able to master the use of the Water Style: Dehydration jutsu that they would be able to master the eyes themselves. For this reason, this is normally the first jutsu taught to a member of the Rentei clan upon awakening the Seigan. 

Appearance: the victim feels thirsty as their body starts to dry up.
Handseals: -
Duration: 4
Cooldown: #used +2
Range: eye contact 
Power: 40
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
Through eye contact the user places the target under a genjutsu that lasts for a number of rounds. Through out the duration of the jutsu the target gets thirsty before feeling like they are dehydrating before their body starts to dry up. 

Post 1 the target simply feels thirsty, but post 2 steps it up to feeling dehydrated. At post 3 they see their body start to dry up, and by post 4 they are a little more than a mummy. 

If the target is unable to break the genjutsu by the end of the 4th post they are knocked out. This is simply a visual illusion done by manipulating the victim's chakra. Due to this, the victim takes a -40 debuff to speed for the duration of the genjutsu. In the case of the user breaking free of the genjutsu, the debuff will consist for the entire 4 posts. 

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1,750
Action Cost: 40,20
Mastery: no
Bonus Requirements: Seigan LV 1
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive: site canon, BL


Last edited by Travin Rentei on Mon Dec 28, 2020 11:34 am; edited 1 time in total
Ishimaru Shinkou
Ishimaru Shinkou
Hokage
Hokage
Ryo : 2200

Water Style: Dehydration Empty Re: Water Style: Dehydration

Mon Dec 28, 2020 11:29 am
There are a few grammatical errors but nothing that cant be fixed during editing.

The cool down should be posts used +2

If this is going to debuff then it should be labeled as a debuff can you can only get a combined total of 40 (or 20 split between two stats) as is customary for all debuffs.
Kain Wraith
Kain Wraith
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 16000

Water Style: Dehydration Empty Re: Water Style: Dehydration

Mon Dec 28, 2020 11:35 am
made edits
cleaned what the grammer let me know if i missed anything their
made the debuff a stright -40 speed
Ishimaru Shinkou
Ishimaru Shinkou
Hokage
Hokage
Ryo : 2200

Water Style: Dehydration Empty Re: Water Style: Dehydration

Tue Dec 29, 2020 3:32 pm
oksy looks good. Approved
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