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Wed Dec 23, 2020 12:57 pm
Standing 10 meters to the right of Blaisa and five meters behind her jutsu, Flow continued to look up towards the trees in order to gain a sense of who the individual was that dared to attack the two of them.  Upon activation of his Mangekyo Sharingan, Flow took a closer inspection on who was up in the trees.  “Blaisa – stop!”, Flow would command quickly before moving closer to the Sarutobi’s right side at max speed, now standing 5 meters away from her and at a safe distance away from Blaisa’s jutsu.  “It’s Azumi!  I recognize that chakra…”, he would begin to announce, urging Blaisa to take no further offensive action. 
 
Watching as Azumi would use the substitution jutsu with such prowess, he took note of the girl who would then closer approach the two of them at her own max speed, resting 5 meters away from the Sarutobi and 10 meters away from himself.  Turning around to listen to the sound of ninja tools coming their way, he would come to notice the shuriken - beginning to instruct the Sarutobi on the location of the next mysterious opponent who began to attack them.  “Blaisa - two shuriken!  Coming in from the southwest!”, Flow would announce in hopes that the Sarutobi would react in time.  Watching as her fire jutsu safely repositioned into a defensive state, he knew that he no longer had to worry about his Sarutobi friend’s reaction time.  While watching Blaisa perform the shadow clone jutsu and ordering it to use another jutsu, Flow paid close attention as he looked up at the 45-meter wall of fire in shock.  Being impressed but staying silent, his attention was then directed to the north side as he saw Hojiro Hoshigaki begin to arrive at their destination.
 
Listening to Blaisa as she gave them all instructions on how to escape, Flow nodded his head in acknowledgement before quickly making his way northeast off the 20-meter path and into the forest, moving at his max speed.  Following close behind Hojiro, Azumi, and Blaisa – Flow was now 30 meters northeast into the thick, dense, covering forest standing 1 meter behind the three shinobi, moving to this location at his max speed instantly.  Watching as his three friends began to utilize their Body Flicker techniques in order to clear into the village gates, he watched with a look of happiness that his leaf companions were capable of being just as fast as he was.
 
Wasting no time in hesitation to follow, Flow immediately used his own Body Flicker Technique in order to get inside the Village Gates safely.  He would move at his max speed, flickering 20 meters in a straight line towards the northwest direction, effectively being safe inside of his Village and successfully evading the enemy.


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Thu Dec 24, 2020 6:09 am
An unusual sight? no birds, or nothing oddly took off from yoshimitsu's view of the forest.  he understood he was close to the entrance of the village which meant he had no means to belive there was an elite fighter nearby.

How boring.

yoshi thought as he continued forward at maximum speed. towards the location where the clone went.

unfortunately since he had little less to do he adjusted his height  in the air to 15 meters above the treeline. He wouldnt notice the  shifting of leaves 70 meters from him. But out of boredom didnt care to notice. Still he had an idea that would make something fun.  Since of course there was little less to do. As the original had reached 65  meters above the location  of his original (at this time NPC is 5 meters below the treeline)  He glanced down towards the general area. With such an high vantage. A Simple idea formed in his head as he too would need to see and  grant himself visual of such an area.

lets give the clone some light.

yoshi thought as he weaved a large sequence of seals at max speed, first Horse - Tiger - Snake - Clap Hands: to amplify the jutsu, and finally  Snake, Ram,Monkey, Boar  Tiger to shoot an empowered fireball with greatly enhanced power.  To simply ignite the trees and leaves in the path of the 20 meter diameter fireball, and well sorrounding area in which the trees were in, but should some one be in the way they too will be engulfed in the fireball. The narrow tight tree line would mean itll be much more important to escape the area.

It was for chaotic means of course. Still this would happen  to be going in the direction of his clone below, and for better or worst the invisible person he did not notice. But knowing the clone needed light anyway to appropriately see.  But in this the invisible target was 30 meters above The ground at this time. (A rank great fireball jutsu: power: 100 (base 50, enhanced by nin amp:+50 power)

The fireball would begin burning the tops of the trees and spreading along the treeline erasing any logical escape for anyone trying to reach him through the treeline, as the perpitrator by this time said invisible guest was diving down towards roughly 22 meters from the ground. And still had 7 meters to go to have the clone appear, and fall to its actions. (since the NPC headed into  a space to not rustle leaves, and their clone drops 15 meters to the ground. Its safe to assume  wan decends 25 meters towards the ground.) The fireball would of course fizzle out 15 meters above the clone, but the fires will remain, but would effectively cut off their ability to retreatas the trees in the area would ignite with intense flames.


yoshi would await as at maximum speed he would retreat backwards and acend up like a steep hill to being now 45 meters above the now rapidly burning treeline.The fire spreaded  with both speed, and fierce agression. Meaning if anything anyone below would best clear the area. Knowing his clone was down there he didnt fret too much. The rising smoke while obscuring his vision from looking down he would spot someone, or something easily emerging from the smoke below.

But of course if someone desired to come up yozhi wouldnt complain much as he with both speed and skill reached in his weapons pouch on his left hip, and  prouduced a shruiken he held between his  ring and index finger, and a kunai he secured safely between his index finger and thumb.

(fireball timelines the NPC's direct adcension back above the treeline,)

(yoshimitsu clone:)

The thing about surpises was that some had inate luck, and others, well just never truly  got it. The shruikens he threw flew towards the girl, and boy. Frankly they did notice. All was good, but due to severe diffrence in speeds well the girl made an perhaps uncanny stroke of luck manuver. She moved forward  as her back was turned. saving her a world of hurt. As She then decided to turn.   her fire dragon too which if she was being safe, would be as far from herself as possible. lest she wished to cook herself. the shruiken wizzed by nicking her clothing as a result, and falling harmlessly to the ground several meters to her right. only to melt from the heat of said fire dragon. which barely got in front from the girl safely manuvering it.

The boy... well it was an unfortunate sign of luck he was saved from the shruikens comming towards him, but there were other chances to blossom with these intentions.


with another flick the clone would send the shruiken in his left hand directly at the girls left shin. Since she was busy moving the fire dragon in front of her. This shruiken would simply melt vs the dragons heat. the dragon and hopefully hit home. (throwing speed:175, impact force:122, sharpness:30) (attempting to stop blasai's escape)

is this girl challenging me!!!???

the clone thought as he took a step forward and made his movement a roaring from above would cause the clone to glance up and spot the raging fireball decending towards him.

hm? well i guess we should move


the clone thought as he  would note the burning leaves beginning to fall and at 5 meters the clone between two trees. The yoshimitsu clone  would spot the decending shadowy figure thanks to the fireball approaching this  would illuminate the woman since they were not hidden by hiding with camoflage.

with an simple open handed slap aimed at the woman  ribcage area and send her flying into a tree 1 meter to his right,  (speed:200, strength: 70) since this was a blur to the girl the chances of proper defense was terribly slim unless they were just as fast. Regardless the girl would be sent flying into the tree to the yoshimitsu clone's left. impacting with the tree head first and dispersing on contact, as the woman's neck wold've been broken, and head wouldve  been cracked open like an egg.  (qualifying easily as lethal damage.) even with the display of power the clone would still slap her out the air into the tree shrugging as if batting away a fly that was annoying. it wasnt a threat just intimidation from something already  dead trying to get the drop on him. perhaps if it was behind the dragon or whatever maybe the clone would've cared. but it was a clone and was expendable.

hm they come from the trees.? oh well lets see what these people have.
(timelining the NPC's clones actions before landing on the ground.)

now that the unexpected was delt with in less then a instant the  clone continued moving at maximum speed into the clearing  and circledto the right of the fire dragon, maintaining 50 meters from the fire dragon




right little girl come on then! show me whatcha got fire girl!

The clone thought as with out losing  beat nor his speed thanks to his enhancements. He gazed at it  knowing anything all he needed to was burn out all of their options. The question now was how was the best way to do this.

Easy enough to avoid  so lets make this interesting... pressure now...



The clone thought as with its enhanced speed moving so there was an opening in the dragon's protection. Since he was signifigantly faster he could spot the girl,boy, and now the pathway they desperately tried to block off. He flicked his left hand, and threw the shruiken Towards the girl once more now at an opening behind the dragons defense. He then threw the shruiken held in his right hand 1 meter behind the girl. So it landed on the ground behind her. Of course thats if the fire dragon would not block the attempt,  which was good too. (throwing speed: 170, impact force:122, distance:85, sharpness:30)

The  act was simple, keep the girl, and the boy to keep using jutsu, even unenhanced he could keep this up. Now with this he would have view of that southern pathway which the girl desperately tried to block off.

that is funny, but no young one there is no rainbow to run to.


He  thought as  he resolved they will not be able  to escape if he could not help it. So would maintain that same 50 meter distance, now that he had sight of this would cut off any dreams of an escape for the duo.  And keeping the duo in hiz sights as he saw how fast the dragon moved. Now to keep the girl focused on merely keeping the jutsu up  Even in that the The girl managed to make clones. His eyes on each combatant and he smiled softly. They wished to run,or flee.

ill start with these two.


The then it occured to him. The  girl in trees vanished off into the village along with the boy who he could not reach due to the girl and wounded boy... his scowl grew darker. they were like mice able to run into a hole.

another boy who could pay off well?! oho! we cannot let this slip! but yet they do... what must i do for money! give me my money!!!

the clone roared in a mad thought as his eyes went wide with excitement, and bewilderment, and stll noticing the girl whom by now sprouted up a large wall of fire.

impressive but terribly slow. one demensional move

The clone thought as it was preformed by The one clone  of the girl that jumped into the air. the clone noted this and figured if anything the clones would continue to do random stuff. keeping an eye on the clone's the girl,and the boy.


the clone knew no one was going to make it out without him making coin here. The speedy clone maintained its distanc,waiting for the girl and boy to keep acting, and making plans. and her clones now behind the crew. and grinned. As his left hand flashed towards the tanto. in case someone decided to approach.

lets see if red will do the trick young one!


now desiring to force the duo to retreat now back towards the now burning forest from the original yoshimitsu's fireball.





(escapes allowed: azyumi, hojiro,)


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Fri Dec 25, 2020 11:14 am
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Tue Dec 29, 2020 11:24 pm
Jesus fuck, this is a big steaming pile that's for sure. Okay, first of all I would like to apologise for the delay, I've lowkey been looking this over slowly over the past few days but I've been busy as well, but let's get the latest episode of 'Who Fucked Up' started. 

Unfortunate truths

So, I suppose I will be starting with one of the most important parts of this entire ordeal... the validity of certain jutsu on the stat page of Yoshimitsu. As Wan rightly pointed out in the request itself, Yoshi here shouldn't be able to have either of the two techniques that he just used in an attempt to defend himself from the NPC's onslaught. The techniques in question, Great Fireball Shower and Hiding in the Ash and Dust, have bonus requirements. Great Fireball Shower in particular requires a specific technique that Yoshi does not possess, and is thus invalid. Hiding in the Ash and Dust requires 2 Fire techniques of B-rank and above... something that he met with Great Fireball Shower, but without doe not meet. In this case, I will be ruling that Yoshi is unable to use either of the techniques for this topic, until he learns Phoenix Flower (Link). Now, in light of this, Yoshi will be allowed to edit his post, but I will comment on some... other stuff in that post that I would classify as invalid. 

Leaves and Hits


So, from 150m away, without a Byakugan or Sharingan, Yoshimitsu took note of a single specific section of the canopy that rustled... when he is staning 40m above the treeline itself, which would be constantly rustling due to wind? Yea, no. That's beyond even what the V6 Experienced Fighter skill allowed, and i am sure as hell not allowing it nowadays. On top of that though, the hits claimed by Yoshi certainly would not have hit. Blaisa actually did a very nice job of explaining exactly why this is the case in this handly little Google Doc. 

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And here is where we will end this episode everyone, I hope you enjoyed this a little more than I did, because I am starting to develop a migraine from having to scour all of these posts for these specific holes and flaws. There were a hell of a lot more, but most don't matter compared to these ones that I have mentioned. As usual, let's all hope we don't get another episode of this show for awhile.
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Sun Jan 03, 2021 1:54 am
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Mon Jan 04, 2021 9:23 pm
(Claiming hits made in last post made by Karruchi with timelines. Call a BM I'm too busy rn.)
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Fri Jan 08, 2021 8:39 pm
*Sigh*

Well, I was called back into this one pretty quickly wasn't I. Unfortunately, this is an easy enough decision for a battlemod to make, but I'll explain exactly why

Unfortunately Yoshi, you cannot go back into your previous posts timeline to change a key detail to give yourself an advantage, at least not without an actual reason to do so (something to react to). You have attempted to change the height at which your character is standing above the treeline from 40m to 15m, but you didn't give any way for it to happen or react to anything to change your mind, you just had your character decide to get bored and that's where he stopped instead...

"unfortunately since he had little less to do he adjusted his height  in the air to 15 meters above the treeline"

Now... there are also a plethora of other issues, one of which would actually be that the Invisible NPC would actually be out of the treeline by the time your fireball hit the canopy thanks to speed alone. The speed of the fireball you launched being 50, and it needing to travel 15m; while the NPC possesses a speed of 180 and only needed to travel 25m... by the time that fireball travelled 15m the NPC could have travelled almost 50m. This is made even worse when we take into account the attempted change of distance, since that would put you 40m above the canopy and thus force your fireball to travel 40m... that would allow the NPC to travel over 120m easily in that time. 

Another issue would be the inconsistency I am seeing regarding the distance between yourself and your opponents Yoshi, as you stated that Karruchi must have descended 25m to drop the clone 15m, something that does indeed match with the 40m tall canopy that you set in your first post... but, after that and when Karruchi was already moving towards you, you mentioned Karruchi being 30m from the canopy... that doesn't line up with everything else. 

I could really keep listing off more issues, but I don't think there is much of a point, as any of these points alone would honestly be enough to claim the hits.

The hits of Karruchi and the clone connect on Yoshimitsu and his clone respectively, the clone itself being destroyed and Yoshi having his ribcage shattered and an (as of yet undecided) portion of his body blown off according to Wan's last post and the damage he detailed. 

Flow, Azumi, Blaisa and Hojiro escape without issue.

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Fri Jan 08, 2021 11:19 pm
rebuttal.


1. the height adjustment was still in original post pre edit. you simply said i could not notice the  woman due to distance. which i pretty much changed accordingly. still keeping the adjustment due to traveling, and such, but changing the reason.  to not noticing npc neither rise or, descending, and adjusted responses based on said jutsu not being used. but nothing else. As it was not an edit for advantage I simply kept the same narrative on attacking indirectly the npc and their clone. different methods however.

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2. While i can agree with the npc rising up faster. i cannot agree with it rising without appropriate description to  handle the fireball via the timeline claim.  Even if it means easily swerving around it. then going on its initial attack which can hit via a new post. (won't argue), but since a new post is not there. Well can we all agree it gets pretty messy.

in the case if stating their hits are confirmed.  since no denying the fireball forming and firing in their direct Ascension path. Then they perished via the fireball before reaching their original spot of 150 meters in the air and continuing on to attacking. *refer to wans post* Even if they are faster. Since  the fire ball is formed as they are decending, and Without adjustments  via a new post. and via my timeline, Then they fly straight up, and now pretty much ran into a fireball moving down towards them in their direct flight path.... before reaching  as per the og post. *since there was no new post and no adjustments via that new post.* 150 meters in the air. well a charred skeleton now. and dead....

yes it is unfortunate, but it's why a response is good to throw in with a claim is much better then bland claims. because you then allow the narrative to go through, and they die. vs well keeping safe, and doing proper response.

edit: this in addition if we are saying this. clone goes poof before doing anything, due to the npc dying then and there, and/or as my clone slaps her out the air, and stuff moves forward.
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