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Primrose Uchiha
Primrose Uchiha
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Stat Page : Prims Stats
Remove Fuuinjutsu Ninjutsu Default
Wind Lightning Fire Default
Clan Specialty : EMS
Village : Vagabonds
Ryo : 12000

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Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:09 pm
Prim relaxed her entire body. In her mind she pictured chakra flowing through her body. Unpredictable. Yeah...the way her chakra was flowing, it was unpredictable. Her arm began to tingle. It was moving sporadically through her. Very much like flowing water, no certain direction. Prim looked down at the glove when suddenly a bright flash lit the glove up. It was only about four seconds of a flash but it still happened. Prims eyes were about to pop out of her head as she looked from the glove to Vretyel.

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(Sorry short, at work lol)


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Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:45 pm
Prim relaxed her entire body. In her mind she pictured chakra flowing through her body. Unpredictable. Yeah...the way her chakra was flowing, it was unpredictable. Her arm began to tingle. It was moving sporadically through her. Very much like flowing water, no certain direction. Prim looked down at the glove when suddenly a bright flash lit the glove up. It was only about four seconds of a flash but it still happened. Prims eyes were about to pop out of her head as she looked from the glove to Vretyel.

"No, Primrose that was the conductor again. You were unpredictable but you did not make it spontaneous. You just let the chakra flow thorough you, didn't you? That is a step, but you have yet to produce lightning chakra. You have one more chance, concentrate, control the chakra, but let it flow though."

There would be NO possible way she would get lightning chakra to her hands today, at the rate she was going and the chakra that she was using, he was ready to make sure that she would not kill herself trying this as well, forcing the lightning chakra at this time would mean disaster for her nerves on her hands.
Primrose Uchiha
Primrose Uchiha
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Stat Page : Prims Stats
Remove Fuuinjutsu Ninjutsu Default
Wind Lightning Fire Default
Clan Specialty : EMS
Village : Vagabonds
Ryo : 12000

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Wed Oct 31, 2012 12:22 am
"Come on." Prim said to herself. Vretyel was trying to help her learn lightning chakra. "Damn it, I know I can do this." Prim relaxed again and could feel chakra running through her body. She thought about things that are unpredictable. Lightning definitely was. She imagined the lightning as the chakra flowing through her veins. You never know when lightning will strike or where it will strike. Prim was beginning to get frustrated again. Just one tiny spark to show herself she could do it. She stayed relaxed and focused, somehow it felt different...it didn’t hurt or sting. Another bright flash lit up the glove and Prims hand was starting to burn now, but she didn’t want Vretyek to know. Considering she was to determine to quit, even this pain was not about to stop her from learning.

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Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:06 am
"Come on." Prim said to herself. Vretyel was trying to help her learn lightning chakra. "Damn it, I know I can do this." Prim relaxed again and could feel chakra running through her body. She thought about things that are unpredictable. Lightning definitely was. She imagined the lightning as the chakra flowing through her veins. You never know when lightning will strike or where it will strike. Prim was beginning to get frustrated again. Just one tiny spark to show herself she could do it. She stayed relaxed and focused, somehow it felt different...it didn’t hurt or sting. Another bright flash lit up the glove and Prims hand was starting to burn now, but she didn’t want Vretyek to know. Considering she was to determine to quit, even this pain was not about to stop her from learning.

She wasn't listening, even if she didn't tell Vretyel that she was in pain he knew that she was bound to be. His gloves were not meant to glove like that, and if she tried anymore she would destroy and gloves, and possibly her arms. She did not realize that the more that she focused the more that she could be burning her hands, and now it was time to stop it.

Without warning Vretyel ran up to Primrose while concentrating chakra to his feet, and touched her with his right hand, the one that still had the glove on. Not only that but he also charged the glove with as much lightning chakra as possible. If this hit, which would be nearly impossible to dodge anyway, vretyel would knock out given her current state. He did this for her own safety and for the preservation of his glove.
Primrose Uchiha
Primrose Uchiha
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Missing-Nin (B-rank)
Stat Page : Prims Stats
Remove Fuuinjutsu Ninjutsu Default
Wind Lightning Fire Default
Clan Specialty : EMS
Village : Vagabonds
Ryo : 12000

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Wed Oct 31, 2012 5:29 pm
When the pain got to the point she wanted to scream, Prim suddenly felt a powerful force knock the wind out of her and she hit the ground. Apparently she was knocked out. But her whole body was sore. She could still hear what was going on around her. Okay, so maybe she was trying a little too hard to learn the lightning element, granted she may have hurt herself. “Lesson learned, you can’t turn fire to lightning…That is not even possible. Wow, what the heck was I thinking?” She said to herself mentally. “Way to go Primrose, you are yet again on the ground and this time you are in severe pain, I hope you didn’t burn or shock yourself, it is a good thing that at least Vretyel is here and stopped you.” She said to herself again. That had to be it, she sure as hell didn’t knock herself out! Or did she? Regardless training was over and Primrose was in a lot of pain. She did have to remember to at least say thank you to Vretyel for trying to help her, when she speak or move again, and when she was not hurting so bad. It was a cross between feeling like she was sunburned and then just a dull ache more from hitting the ground. Or so she hoped.

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Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:26 pm
As Primrose fell to the ground Vretyel grabbed her with his other hand so he did not shock her more. With his right hand still wielding his lightning glove Vretyel took off the lightning glove that Prim was holding to reveal the truth. Thankfully Prim was not awake or lucid during this time so she would not panic.

Her hand had several third degree burns that had charred her skin and turned it black. Her misuse of the lightning element and the gloves made that possible to the point that if Vretyel had not stopped her when he did there would have been permanent damage, she would need to go to the hospital right away in order for her to get her wounds healed.

Why had she not passed out before this, this girl should have been passed out long ago, but there she stood still trying to learn. Strange, maybe there still is hope for her to become a great lightning ninja, but who knows, maybe it was just because she was not seeing the damage that she was doing to herself. She cannot see what has happened or she will most surely panic. Primrose is not strong in that sense, in fact, I think that she is delusional. She never "wanted to get up early" before, something has changed. I don't know what is going to happen know, with me and her, Knowing her she will probably just forget about the whole thing and say it was joke, she isn't cut out to be a ninja, and you knew that, but still you allowed her to almost hurt herself permanently, did you want to see her suffer?

Vretyel thought to himself for a bit more about that question, did you want to see her suffer? But right now there was no time to answer it. Before she moved the girl Vretyel took some of his bandaging out and wrapped her left arm. If anybody were to see the damage, even the Hokage, her cousin Vretyel might get in some serious trouble, she would have to let her arm heal for a few days and then maybe have somebody tell her what happened today. Vretyel picked Primrose up with one of his hands, got his staff with the other, got all of Primroses items and put them in his sack, and the to went to the hospital to get medical attention for her.

[Primrose and Vretyel exit, 1814, +9 stats and + 18 JP]
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Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:42 am
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+9 Stats, +18 JP
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